Correction: Writing a Scope Change Email - Keep Relationships Intact
Corrected by Selen Ikbal Uslu · Content Quality Analyst and English Language Specialist
Selen Ikbal Uslu found something wrong, outdated, or unsupported on this page and proposed a fix. The publisher accepted the correction.
- Role
- Correction
- Publisher
- Evolang
- Topic
- Email Templates
- Status
- Accepted
- Date
- 19 July 2026
The exact change
"You write a scope email in proportion to the mutual respect you expect at the end of the project. If you cannot write a clear scope email, you will not get a clear scope." Ann Handley, Everybody Writes [...] "The reader of a scope change email is trying to answer one question: should I trust this person to run my project. Everything in the email either builds or erodes that answer." Josh Bernoff, Writing Without Bullshit [...] "When you make a request and it meets resistance, the resistance is information. You learn what the client actually cares about. Use that." Roy Peter Clark, Writing Tools [...] "Your job is not to protect the client from reality. It is to present reality clearly enough that the client can make a good decision." William Zinsser, On Writing Well
A clear scope change email tends to earn a clear response: writing with the mutual respect you expect at the end of a project sets the tone for the rest of the engagement. [...] The reader of a scope change email is essentially trying to answer one question: should I trust this person to run my project. Everything in the email either builds or erodes that answer. [...] When a request meets resistance, treat the resistance as information. It tells you what the client actually cares about. [...] Your job is not to protect the client from reality. It is to present reality clearly enough that the client can make a good decision.
Why this is better
Quote attributed to Ann Handley (Everybody Writes) could not be verified via web search; no record of this exact wording in her book.; Quote attributed to Josh Bernoff (Writing Without Bullshit) could not be verified via web search; no record of this exact wording in his book.; Quote attributed to Roy Peter Clark (Writing Tools) could not be verified via web search; no record of this exact wording in his book.; Author's name is misspelled as "Stephen Pinker" instead of the correct "Steven Pinker," and the attributed quote could not be verified via web search.
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