Correction: Transition Words for Academic Writing: A Complete Reference
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- Role
- Correction
- Publisher
- Evolang
- Topic
- Grammar Guide
- Status
- Accepted
- Date
- 19 July 2026
The exact change
"Transition words are the rails the reader runs on. Lay them carelessly and the reader derails. Lay them well and the reader travels smoothly from claim to claim without even noticing the work the writer has done." Stanley Fish, How to Write a Sentence [...] "The writer who inserts 'therefore' without a real causal chain is asking the reader to accept a claim that the argument has not earned. Transitions that promise causation must deliver it." Deirdre McCloskey, Economical Writing [...] "Transitions are not spackle to cover cracks in the argument. If you find yourself reaching for 'however' or 'therefore' to disguise a weak link, fix the link, not the transition." Joseph Williams, Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace
Writers on style, including Stanley Fish in How to Write a Sentence, have described good transitions as the mechanism that lets a reader move smoothly from claim to claim, often without noticing the work the writer put into the connections. [...] Writing guides such as Deirdre McCloskey's Economical Writing caution that inserting a word like 'therefore' without a real causal chain behind it asks the reader to accept a claim the argument has not actually earned. [...] Style guides such as Joseph Williams's Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace make the point that transitions should not be used to paper over a weak logical link; if a sentence needs 'however' or 'therefore' to disguise a gap in the argument, the fix is to strengthen the argument itself.
Why this is better
Fabricated quote attributed to Stanley Fish. This exact quote does not appear in How to Write a Sentence or any other indexed source.; Fabricated quote attributed to Deirdre McCloskey. This exact quote does not appear in Economical Writing or any other indexed source.; Fabricated quote attributed to Joseph Williams. This exact quote does not appear in Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace or any other indexed source.
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